Ki Ora Faith I really like your presentation because there is a lot of photos to show the a picture of your writing. One think you could work on is adding information because there is not much about the Ancient Olympic Games. Ka Pai From Holly
Kia Ora Faith That's a really cool slide show on Ancient Olympics. I like how you put heaps of photos to show the reader some further info. Maybe next time make a few more slides with different info, like who started the Olympics. Great post! From Emma W
Kia Ora Faith I really like your work and I think you did an awesome job. I think you could improve by putting more slides but you really, really did a very, very awesome job. Keep up the good work. I wish I was clever like you are and I did enjoy it. Ka Pai Faith! From Autumn
Ki Ora Faith
ReplyDeleteI really like your presentation because there is a lot of photos to show the a picture of your writing. One think you could work on is adding information because there is not much about the Ancient Olympic Games. Ka Pai
From Holly
Kia Ora Faith
ReplyDeleteThat's a really cool slide show on Ancient Olympics. I like how you put heaps of photos to show the reader some further info. Maybe next time make a few more slides with different info, like who started the Olympics. Great post! From Emma W
Kia Ora Faith
ReplyDeleteI really like your work and I think you did an awesome job.
I think you could improve by putting more slides but you really, really did a very, very awesome job. Keep up the good work. I wish I was clever like you are and I did enjoy it. Ka Pai Faith!
From Autumn